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poppy β‹†ΛšΰΏ”'s avatar

WOWWWWW!! I need more…. this is such incredible work emmaaaaaβ€οΈβ€πŸ©Ή

aline ✨'s avatar

OMG HOW DID I NOT REALIZE YOU POSTED THIS??? it's really really wowie good

𝑒𝓂𝓂𝒢 𝑔𝓇𝒢𝒸𝑒 πŸžβ‹†Λšκ©œ's avatar

thank u aline!! it was a midnight post πŸ™‚β€β†•οΈπŸ’—

M. Metzler's avatar

wow emma. your writing matches the story so well, amazing piece!!

Sophhh🌻's avatar

I’m stunned by this piece πŸšͺ one of my favorites from you so far!! Wonderfully written as always 🫢

Renee's avatar

this could be interpreted many ways. the agony of unrequited love, of unbalanced love, love that you know you should walk away from but just can’t seem to for whatever reason. that part of you that knows better than to have hope. this is beautiful.

𝑒𝓂𝓂𝒢 𝑔𝓇𝒢𝒸𝑒 πŸžβ‹†Λšκ©œ's avatar

thank you renee!! love to hear the different ways it can be interpreted and viewed! :)

Luca's avatar

I love the imagery here. Really reminds me of how memories (and the people who helped make them) exist in this weird liminal space, often distorted by emotions and time. Some are alive, some dead, and the distinction between them isn’t always defined by whether or not those in the memories still exist outside of them. Just my own interpretation. Definitely going to stack my favorite passage. Great work! πŸ’•

A Journey in Journaling's avatar

That was such an incredible read. My god was this well written. πŸ˜… gave me goosebumps.

π™½πš’πšŒπš‘πš˜πš•πšŠπšœ πš†πšŠπš›πš›πšŽπš—'s avatar

There’s probably a dozen lines here I want to restack πŸ–€ this was brutally lovely, truly.

π™½πš’πšŒπš‘πš˜πš•πšŠπšœ πš†πšŠπš›πš›πšŽπš—'s avatar

Of course! πŸ–€

Fiona🌻's avatar

this is fantastic omg. there are lots of lines i feel deeply inside me. it's so relatable. amazing work emma<33

mia <3's avatar

hey diva, did you kiss that brick before you threw it? because i’m stunned and that hurt ;)

Berlin Foster's avatar

Dang. How do I get my heart back exactly? Because this was absolutely beautiful and I think it's missing from my chest now.